http://aftersimple.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] aftersimple.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] yelo 2011-10-15 11:33 am (UTC)

Замечательно написано. По смыслу отчасти напоминает мне ахматовское "Я научилась просто, мудро жить...". А 4-ая строфа как здорово выстроена фонетически.
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